Elanór
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Post by Elanór on Apr 17, 2006 6:10:58 GMT -5
Great history. Good battle discription, also on the detail level. I enjoyed reading it very much! :-)
It got me a bit confused sometimes because of the gramma - loads of the lines are missing the word "The" and "a". Perhaps reading it through a coupple of times before posting it would help you get rid of those little things.
All in all a great story! Thumps up :-)
Elanór
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Edor
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Post by Edor on Apr 17, 2006 6:53:05 GMT -5
I love allways reading these stories about Stratholme. Cant wait to see next chapter
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Post by idori on Apr 17, 2006 6:55:57 GMT -5
Yay! Those were Dominicus and Elias Really good story telling Daeglin, but im suprised that all storys here that consider the Fall of Stratholme dont mention Mal'Ganis being there.. And as Elanor mentioned there was some gramma problems, but i dont really care about those since all my writings are full of those. I was really suprised that the second batallion didint know about ghouls and zombies. Stratholme wasent the first place that plague of undead hit. anyway , keep posting these, really nice reading.
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Post by idori on Apr 17, 2006 7:20:15 GMT -5
Their were sitting all the time in Tyr's Hand...and all plague situation was top secret to dont born panic in recruits...about gramma problems...i was writing it in the middle of night. about mal'ganis..thats story from simple soldier point of view...so they saw only hordes of zombies...and Mal ganis could be even in other part of town. And the story ends at the begining of battle when all zombies started to awakening...so Mal Ganis could not be on battlefield yet. PS. Episode 2- The Shadow will be ready as soon as im gonna rest. PPS. I have also added few real characters that can be found in wow like..Abbendis or Isillien. These guys are Tyrs Hand mobs...the story how they joined scarlet crusade will be in next episode. Yeah i knew about Abbendis and Isillien, in warcraft lore Isillien is dead he, was killed by Tirion Fordring btw. Dont know what happened to abbendis though.
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Post by idori on Apr 17, 2006 10:19:32 GMT -5
Wowwiki hasent updated that guy. But it may be possible that someone resurrected him after Tirion killed him...
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Post by idori on Apr 17, 2006 12:54:38 GMT -5
Actualy the only lore that contains hes death is quest chain. i got no time to write goos story about hes death ,but anyway in this quest he gets killed by tirion fordring just after he killed Tirion fordrings son : Taelan fordring. the quest : www.thottbot.com/?qu=5862Taelan : www.wowwiki.com/Taelan_Fordring
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Dominicus
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Post by Dominicus on Apr 17, 2006 19:14:13 GMT -5
Yay! Those were Dominicus and Elias ;D
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